Shallow layer of blue water entices the corpse - weary and ambulating with a stutter,
Titillating senses of rapture blitzkrieg through the soul as the toe flirts with the surface tension of water.
Sprinkles of water rise - gently massaging and tickling the muscles hampered by stress and laze,
Encumbered mind flees and soul moans in rapture as the bubbling warm water unearths the mystery (of life) and demystifies the haze.
For the uninitiated..this is an Ode to Jacuzzi at my Condo - Yew Mei Green.
4 comments:
can comprehend a bit .... still make it more simpler .....seems like its hard to be simple ....
Anusha .... it should not be coming down ...rather rising to the level of common man ..... what say ?
So what's up next buddy? When do we get to see an ode to your towel, wash-basin, shower, taps and other bathroom fittings.
I am sure you could make poetry out of them as well; I'd be damned if I thought you couldn't!!
That's Muchhhhhh Bettahhhh! :)
Hey already gave u my comments on chat.
Since it bears repeating, repeat I will, this one 'flows' (pun intended) much better.
Here's to reading more of ur keyboard's offerings. :)
Decided to blame ur keyboard and not u. Indulging in a bit of Gandhigiri. :)
And Sid, I totally agree with u. Rise to our level indeed!!!
Here is to bouying u up Easwar! 3 Cheers!
May u rise to our level like the bubbles in ur jacuzzi do. But with a more lasting effect :)
And Divya has it right as well. Sundry items never had it so good. They get immortalised (shud I say fossilised) with ur around to record their essence ;))
And Bro! Inspite of all the teasing, we do look fwd to ur rhymes. Teasing u adds to our pleasure. Don't begrudge us that pls. Do not be disheartened. Remember we adore u. Always. :)
Post a Comment